Flash fiction, 1k words, Second Place Winner Talebones Weekly Flash Fiction Contest
Very interesting read… an argument with the Spirit about “what is ugly” and what is not?
Either that or an argument with the Spirit about how he ought to cut back on how much time he spends on his phone!
To me a lesson in overcoming self-righteous self-centered arrogance that could only be reset by a drastic change in perspective, perhaps too late...but I loved it!
Agreed! I must admit though, I do share with him a prejudice against big ugly churches, haha!
No dispute there! Big ugly church's enable the very same arrogance at a certain level.
Well done. I like the parallel between the mans heart and the box in the church.
Thank you for the suggestion to keep it in!
Very interesting read… an argument with the Spirit about “what is ugly” and what is not?
Either that or an argument with the Spirit about how he ought to cut back on how much time he spends on his phone!
To me a lesson in overcoming self-righteous self-centered arrogance that could only be reset by a drastic change in perspective, perhaps too late...but I loved it!
Agreed! I must admit though, I do share with him a prejudice against big ugly churches, haha!
No dispute there! Big ugly church's enable the very same arrogance at a certain level.
Well done. I like the parallel between the mans heart and the box in the church.
Thank you for the suggestion to keep it in!